Round 1 email copy

MobiusEngine, first 30,000 sends. 11 versions, about 2,700 sends each. We compare reply rates at the 30,000 send review and scale the winners.

How it works

Single email, no follow ups. Every version asks for a reply, no links. Blue tags like first name fill in per person. Versions that use the job title only go to contacts where we have one.

Three quick questions

  1. OK to mention OpenAI while you are still there? (version 1)
  2. Do you have a real member who got a ~40% comp bump? If yes we add the number back in.
  3. For Aaghash: each sending domain will get its own small MobiusEngine page with a button to sign up, linking to app.mobiusengine.ai/?ref=<domain>. Can you save that ref on signup? Then we can see who signed up from the emails without replying.
  4. Can you fill in the onboarding form when you get a minute? We will tune round 2 from your answers.

The 11 versions

1

Your version, cleaned up

Your original draft as the control. Removed "25 years" and "guarantees success" since neither can be backed up if someone checks. Sent to: Everyone with a job title
Subject many high comp title remote roles are hiring

Hi first name,

Are you or someone you know struggling with the job market?

Our founder spent years at Google, JP Morgan and now OpenAI, and built a job application platform where a real person applies to jobs for you. You just tell us what you're after, approve the matches, and then interview.

Can I set you up on 2 week complimentary trial? No card needed.

sender first name
MobiusEngine

2

Pay

People who suspect they are underpaid. Sent to: Everyone with a job title
Subject title pay

Hi first name,

Are you happy with your current comp as a title?

Best way to get a real comp bump is usually just switching companies.

What if there was a real person who sends tailored applications for you? You just tell us what you're after, approve the matches, and then interview.

Can I set you up on a 2 week complimentary trial for this? No card needed.

sender first name
MobiusEngine

3

No time to apply

People who would move but have no time after work. Sent to: Everyone
Subject your evenings

Hi first name,

Would you look at other roles if it didn't cost you so much time?

We built a platform that makes landing interviews 10x faster and effortless.

You tell us what you're after, approve the role matches, a real person does tailored applications for you, you just interview.

Can I set you up on a 2 week complimentary trial for this? No card needed.

sender first name
MobiusEngine

4

Heard nothing back

People who applied before and got silence. Sent to: Everyone
Subject heard nothing back?

Hi first name,

Ever sent out a bunch of job applications and heard nothing back?

It's usually just that if your application isn't super tailored to each job, it gets filtered out before it reaches a human.

We built a platform where a real person tailors every application for you. You tell us what you're after, approve the role matches (takes seconds), then just interview.

Can I set you up on a 2 week complimentary trial for this? No card needed.

sender first name
MobiusEngine

5

A real person, not a bot

People who have seen auto-apply bots and do not trust them. Sent to: Everyone
Subject not a bot

Hi first name,

Seen those tools that auto apply to hundreds of jobs for you?

They usually just spray your resume at roles that you honestly wouldn't take, and you never know what got sent.

We built a platform where a real person tailors every application for you, and you get a screenshot of each one. You tell us what you're after, approve the role matches (takes seconds), then just interview.

Can I set you up on a 2 week complimentary trial for this? No card needed.

sender first name
MobiusEngine

6

Stuck at the same level

People waiting on a promotion that keeps slipping. Sent to: Everyone with a job title
Subject next step up

Hi first name,

Been a title at the same level for a while?

Usually the fastest way up is a move, not waiting on next year's promo cycle.

We built a platform where a real person tailors every application for you. You tell us what you're after, approve the role matches (takes seconds), then just interview.

Can I set you up on a 2 week complimentary trial for this? No card needed.

sender first name
MobiusEngine

7

Offer first

Leads with the offer itself instead of a situation. Sent to: Everyone
Subject interviews, not applications

Hi first name,

Want to land interviews for better roles without writing a single application yourself?

A real person tailors and sends every one for you. You tell us what you're after, approve the role matches (takes seconds), then just interview.

First 2 weeks complimentary trial, no card needed. Want me to set you up?

sender first name
MobiusEngine

8

Without work knowing

People who want to look without their employer finding out. Sent to: Everyone
Subject quietly

Hi first name,

Want to land interviews for better roles without anyone at work knowing you're looking?

Without Open to Work badge or applying at your desk.

You tell us what you're after, approve the role matches (takes seconds), then real person tailors and sends every application for you. You just do the interviews.

First 2 weeks complimentary trial, no card needed. Want me to set you up?

sender first name
MobiusEngine

9

Since the merger

Uncertainty after a merger. Sent to: Only companies that recently merged
Subject since the merger

Hi first name,

Has work felt different since the merger?

With new leadership, reshuffled teams, and uncertainty, usually people start considering other jobs.

Platform we built will help you land interviews for better roles without spending your evenings on applications.

You tell us what you're after, approve the role matches (takes seconds), then a real person tailors and sends every application for you. You just do the interviews.

First 2 weeks complimentary trial, no card needed. Want me to set you up?

sender first name
MobiusEngine

10

One line offer: busy

The whole offer in one sentence, softer ask. Sent to: Everyone
Subject no time to apply

Hi first name,

We built a platform that helps busy professionals who'd move for the right role, but never find time to apply, land interviews. Without writing a single application yourself.

There's a 2 week trial, no card needed.

Want me to explain how it works so you can potentially try it out?

sender first name
MobiusEngine

11

One line offer: underpaid

Same format, simpler words. Sent to: Everyone
Subject paid enough?

Hi first name,

We built a tool for professionals who think they should be paid more.

We find better paying jobs for you. A real person applies for you. You just go to the interviews.

There's a 2 week trial, no card needed.

Want to try it out?

sender first name
MobiusEngine